91 Banana Road
13.3.2018
Fruit valley
0000
Dear, Mum and Dad
I can hear kids screaming at the model dinos. The kids screamed "I want to get out of here." "Come here" kids are telling there Mum to follow them. I can see a jet black and velvit black roof. Outside there is a bush on a very lush field with blades of grass. I can smell the food in the cafe. food smelt like buiger king. The fresh air smelt like lake air. The food I am eating it tastes like rottin eggs. The bones are as smooth as a tree with no bark. Kids are fidling with reptile dino figuires. The front desk is as long as two adults. The cafe has frosted ice-cream.
WHERE AM I?
from Reid
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Reflection:
We been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.
I enjoyed planning because we got to draw our own plan.
Something tricky I think was putting all my ideas together.
Next time I will try to correct more spelling errors.