Mystery Letter

                           
                                           
                                                                                                                  91 Banana Road
                                                                                                                  13.3.2018
                                                                                                                  Fruit valley
                                                                                                                 0000

Dear, Mum and Dad

I can hear kids screaming at the model dinos.  The kids screamed "I want to get out of here." "Come here" kids are telling there Mum to follow them.  I can see a jet black and velvit black roof.  Outside there is a bush on a very lush field with blades of grass.  I can smell the food in the cafe. food smelt like buiger king. The fresh air smelt like lake air.  The food I am eating it tastes like rottin eggs. The bones are as smooth as a tree with no bark.  Kids are fidling with reptile dino figuires.  The front desk is as long as two adults. The cafe has frosted ice-cream.

WHERE AM I?

from Reid

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Reflection:

We been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.

I enjoyed planning because we got to draw our own plan.

Something tricky I think was putting all my ideas together.

Next time I will try to correct more spelling errors.